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Jump in, jump out,
but don't take me down with you.
And when I'm down,
don't kick me.
I looked to you.
I was the user,
the loser,
the one who causes pain, not you.
But deep inside in what you do,
it seems I'm not the one this time
who took their leave, one look, one word.
A wintered silence.
And it's all over. No more touch.
You didn't speak so much.
It's like it never was;
I didn't expect this from you,
I can't quite believe it.
Is it really you? Is it true?
I feel so cold. Unreal.
Lift me up or push me down;
just don't take me unawares.
End
Jump in, jump out,
but don't take me down with you.
And when I'm down,
don't kick me.
I looked to you.
I was the user,
the loser,
the one who causes pain, not you.
But deep inside in what you do,
it seems I'm not the one this time
who took their leave, one look, one word.
A wintered silence.
And it's all over. No more touch.
You didn't speak so much.
It's like it never was;
I didn't expect this from you,
I can't quite believe it.
Is it really you? Is it true?
I feel so cold. Unreal.
Lift me up or push me down;
just don't take me unawares.
End
Found this bit quite near the front of a notepad I bought last August. It was written in blue, and had no date and no signature. I wonder, sometimes, what it is.
© 2007 - 2024 recurring--dreams
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Dagnamit! This is so bloomin awesome! Instant
Just one problem, the last line in the 3rd stanza (or 4th if you count " A wintered silence" as a stanza) kinda throws the rest of.
But apart from that, well done Hitler!
